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ASTROBROT BACKSTORY
Part 1: A loaf of bread kills a mosquito...
By Love+joy of The Staff on THURSDAY, FEBRUARY 28, 2008 AT 10:48 PM
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Part 1: A loaf of bread kills a mosquito by smushing it. He, in turn, is splatted by a huge disembodied fist.

Part 1-A: A loaf is almost smashed by a fist, but dodges the blow, laughing gloatingly. He is then smashed by an even larger fist.

Part 2: The loaf is on an airliner, sitting next to a loaf with lips, and thinking about what to say to her. An apple passes by and asks if they need anything. Suddenly, the plane lists. In the cockpit, the two co-pilots panic. The plane is smashed in midair by an airborne fist.

Part 3: Bread cities are being "bombed" by parafists. The United Breads convenes and agree to mobilize a bread army to destroy the fists, in an alliance with the Corn-sortium. Fierce battles rage on land, at sea, and in the air. The breads are taking heavy losses when the Corn comes in, and it is revealed that the Fists are allergic to Corn. Facing defeat and annihilation by the Corn, the Fists decide to leave the planet, escaping into outer space.

Part 3-A: Now at peace, the Bread are free to expand into the Fist's former territory. The discover their spacefaring technology and use it to develop their own. A peaceful spaceflight program gradually takes shape, with the mission of discovery and exploration.[/i]
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SATURDAY, 03/01/2008 AT 5:04 PM
Is this a fractal-worlds story?

If so, does the next section feature a galactic Bread Empire being crushed by a galaxy-sized mosquito?
squares look distant
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FRIDAY, 02/29/2008 AT 1:07 PM
I hope this story goes on, sounds pretty cool. No pictures?
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